Hi!
To start off, great job on finishing your homework!
I see some issues with accuracy in your lines, which is not really bad since you get better the more you do it. However, I also notice a problem with confidence, which results in not-so-straight lines and some wobbling ellipses.
Another problem I noticed is with the rotating boxes homework; the outer boxes do not really converge strongly to the vanishing point. They seem to follow the lines of the inner boxes too much.
Lastly, in the organic perspective exercises, on some boxes, you did a good job with the convergence to the vanishing points, but on most, they seem to be parallel to each other. Make sure to think about the vanishing point when deciding on your edges.
Next Steps:
Organic Perspective: Do another page of it. Try imagining the three vanishing points and strive to converge them to a single point. Even if some of the boxes feel wrong, it is better than keeping them parallel or even letting them diverge!
Rotating Boxes: For half of the exercises, try to converge the outer boxes more toward the vanishing point.
A lot of folks have heard about Scott Robertson's "How to Draw" - it's basically a classic at this point, and deservedly so. It's also a book that a lot of people struggle with, for the simple reason that they expect it to be a manual or a lesson plan explaining, well... how to draw. It's a reasonable assumption, but I've found that book to be more of a reference book - like an encyclopedia for perspective problems, more useful to people who already have a good basis in perspective.
Sketching: The Basics is a far better choice for beginners. It's more digestible, and while it introduces a lot of similar concepts, it does so in a manner more suited to those earlier in their studies.
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