5:07 PM, Friday January 27th 2023
Thank you for your critique. I'll admit simplification isn't my strong suit.
Here are my revisions:
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1:36 AM, Saturday January 28th 2023
Okayy, your revisions are pretty well done. It is much clearer to see how the forms that you are drawing relate to the previous stages of construction as you’ve started from the most simple and then added more forms without relying too much on guesswork or eyeballing.
I also like to see that you’re relying less on contour lines and you only add them when it is really necessary, which is something you’ll want to keep doing in the next lesson.
For now I’ll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete, good luck on the next one!!!
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Lesson 5
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