Hey!

Overall, this is some great work. However ther are some things to look out for.

The lines in the ghosting exercise are smooth and confident. The elipses you put in the plane exercise are generally well shaped and confident. However, some of them are not drawn through at all, while others seem to be drawn through far more then 2. Remember, draw throuhg your elipses 2-3 times max. No more, no less.

The tables of elipses are actually really good. There are some areas where it seems extremly loose, maybe because of the speed at which you drew them. With the funnels, the outside elipsis should be far wider then the ones more near the center. They should be almost like a circle, rather than just a scaled up verson of the center elipsis.

With the freehand perspective exercise, the lines seem sctatchy. Use the ghosting method for each line, for a clean and confident stroke. Also, the red lines, should not be going back to the vanishing point. The point of the exercise was to see how good you are at freehand perspective, so you should of followed the direction each line was going, and extended it to the horizon. That way, you can see how close you were to the vanishing point. Like the blue lines.

Kudos on completing the rotated boxes! The boxes aren't quite rotating, so you are left with more of a diamond shape rather then a sphere. But don't worry! This is just the first step.

With the organic perspective, the boxes are very sctratchy, like the boxes in the free hand perspective. Use the ghosting method to get a nice clean stroke. And if you made a mistake, don't reinforce it with more lines! It tends to make it more noticable. The boxes almost always follow the line and get smaller. But sometimes they start to get smaller and then halfway through they might stay the same size. The boxes are moving away from the camera and should be getting smaller!

The next thing you should do is the 250 box challenge. This should help you gain a better understanding of objects in 3D space. I'll mark this as complete :)

Hi, BlueBowlsHayStack.

Overall good work on this lesson, but there some things you can definitely pay attention in order to improve.

your work.

On the lines and ellipses parts of the lesson your works is very solid without many major problems. There is some slight wobbling and arching on your ghosted lines, but it's not excessive.

My biggest concern is when you reach the boxes. In all your exercises you keep drawing over the same line more than once, resulting in a very messy work. Doing this doesn't make your work better and hides your mistakes, preventing you from checking them clearly. I believe this is something you can easily avoid, as you proved youhave solid lines on the previous exercises. Also, on the rough perspective exercise you drew the check lines on the vanishing point. This is incorrect. You should extend the lines of your boxes, as this example shows. This way you can check if the perspective lines of your boxes are converging correctly.

On your rotated boxes exercies, some of them are not actually rotating. This section explains it why.

Your organic perspective is mostly good, but going over the same lines is something you should avoid completely, except in order to increase the line weight, which is done with a very specific purpose and in just the outer lines.

Overall you did a good job in this lesson. Keep in mind your mistakes and good luck on the boxes challenge.