6:40 PM, Monday May 22nd 2023
Hello and welcome to Drawabox. Congratulations on completing lesson 1!
Superimposed lines look good, for the most part. On some, it seems like you aren't starting at the same starting point as the other lines.
Ghosted lines are decent, but there is some wobbliness. Be sure to remember that you are looking for smoothness not accuracy.
Ghosted planes are solid. Even if you need to ghost through your line a dozen times, be sure to do it to get that practice in.
For tables of ellipses, you need to make sure you are drawing through the ellipses 2-3 times.
Same thing with the ellipses in planes. You also completely missed the mark on some but then on others you did really well, so be sure to take the time to practice ghosting these and drawing through them as well.
Funnels look good but you need to draw through these 2-3 times as well.
For rotated boxes, it seems like you forgot to do the shading for the sides of the boxes.
Organic perspective, you could use some more variety on the angles of the boxes.
Great work! Submit the request revisions and I'll check you off to move on to the 250 box challenge.
One page of tables of ellipses.