12:49 PM, Monday June 6th 2022
Thank you very much for the critique. It sure did help me to fiugre where to improve!
About the organic intersection and the clean up pass: seen the image of example (https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/07fd0fa0.jpg) made me think I should line weight the visible parts of the pile of sausages. Thats why i did so much line weight, I wasnt realy cleanin up.
I willl follow your structions to make all the form through and I will line weight just to show dominance where the form intersect.