Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

5:44 AM, Sunday January 15th 2023

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Not sure if I made the lines incorrect or not on the box assignments, as I put a point first before ghosting instead of just ghosting and plotting points "in my head." (I block Youtube during periods of doing these assignments to avoid distractions and temptation, so I only referenced the images and reading on said assignment pages)

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10:33 AM, Monday January 16th 2023

To make sure I’m understanding you correctly, blocking youtube means that you didn’t watch our videos at all, or simply watched them first, and then didn’t a second time? If the former, I definitely recommend finding a way to watch them (maybe download them all, that way if you do get distracted it only happens once, and then you’re good for the whole lesson?) The videos are important because the information that we impart onto you in this course is dense, and it’s necessary for it to be delivered in a number of different ways for it to make sense. It’s similar to how watching an art lecture amounts to an art history course, and nothing else, but watching it and practicing what you were taught amounts to learning. Similarly, by only reading the text you only begin to understand the concepts; it’s seeing them applied in practice (and later, applying them in the same way yourself) that makes them stick. Disregard this if it’s the latter, of course! Anyway, let’s take a look at your submission. (Oh, and, to answer your question, you always plot points on the page – never ghost from points in your head.)

Starting with your superimposed lines, these are well done. They’re smooth, properly lined up at the start, and of a consistent trajectory. Some of the longer ones tend to fray a little too quickly, but that’s not too big of a concern. I suppose one thing you can do is check if perhaps you’re not drawing a little too fast. The ghosted lines/planes are quite confident, too. That said, try to be a little less conscious of your end points, if you can. Sometimes your lines will arc as they approach them (in an effort to hit them), but that’s not necessary, especially if it causes your line to change trajectory. What is necessary is that the line is smooth, and straight; accuracy is secondary.

Moving on to your ellipses, the table of ellipses exercise looks great. Your ellipses are confidently, almost effortlessly drawn to be smooth, rounded, and properly drawn through. I’m especially happy to see how comfortable you are having them overshoot their frames in pursuit of said confidence – keep that up! The ellipses in planes do a solid job of maintaining that same level of confidence. Not only that, but they make an effort to conform to the perspective of their planes, which is not something we require (or even expect!) from students at this stage. Finally, the funnels look good. I’d have liked a more obvious range of degrees here (starting from a very thin ellipse, and gradually increasing until you’re left with a full circle), but what’s here is good. Consider, however, lifting your pen off the page at the end of your rotations, rather than flicking it off – it should help get rid of those tails at the end of your ellipses.

Onto your box section; the plotted perspective exercise is well done, if its hatching lines a little scratchy. You seem to have drawn these freehand – actually, you should’ve used a ruler.

The rough perspective exercise is a little mixed. The convergences are well done – they start off strong, and show some nice improvement throughout the set. The linework, on the other hand (though it also improves!) leaves a little to be desired. Here, too, your lines are scratchy, as if you’re drawing roughly (in the fine art fashion) and trying to find the correct line. That’s not how we roll, however. We know what the correct line is, because we’ve plotted points telling us, and when we execute it, we do so confidently, and once. A line that’s confident, but wrong, is fine. One that’s scratchy, is wrong no matter what. Keep that in mind.

The rotated boxes exercise is nicely done. It’s big (huge positive), and its boxes are snug, and though only succeeding slightly, they make a solid attempt at rotation. I also like how proactive you’ve been with this exercise, from how different each quadrant looks. Rather than finding something that mostly works and sticking with it, you’ve tried to improve in every attempt, which is an attitude that will serve you well in this course.

Finally, save for those dang scratchy lines, the organic perspective exercise is well done. The boxes themselves are well constructed, and they flow well, as a result of their size, and foreshortening.

Next Steps:

Consider this lesson complete, and move on to the box challenge. Good luck!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
3:14 PM, Monday January 16th 2023

Thank you for the critique!

I honestly didn't think of downloading the videos beforehand, I will do so from now on! This is probably the third or fourth time I've gone through the line section of Lesson 1, but I never had the burning "why" as to why I would pursue some sort of artistic goal. Also thank you for the clarification on the ghosting.

Upon doing the line lessons, I did realize I was going too fast, and so I purposely tried to slow down on the later exercises and pages.

I did also realize I had a tendency of going back sometimes on line work because it felt like I didn't have a solid "enough" line to work off of for the rest of the assignment, but I will keep in mind that every line is its own handiwork.

The rotated boxes exercise was probably the most fun I had in all of the exercises so far, as I could reiterate and improve upon ideas I wanted to explore in how to more accurately portray the ideas of them, but the fact that it was mentally challenging was most likely the biggest factor.

Once again thank you for the critique, I look forward to the next exercises and critiques.

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