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4:33 AM, Monday May 31st 2021

You did a good job with your lines. Your lines are confident, and made good use of the ghosting method with a few of them wobbling and fraying but nothing too major. On the ghosted lines and planes, you adjusted your pen before each stroke and did a good on your accuracy. Overall, you did a great job at your lines.

As for the ellipses, most of them touch the four sides and you ghosted them pretty well on the ghosted planes. You occupied every space on your table of ellipses very well, but some of them are not consistent with those in the same tables so it could use some more ghosting. Your ellipses in funnels are good overall, but there are some tilting of the minor axis so that could use some work.

Your rough perspective could use some work because a lot of width lines are tilting a little bit as well for the height lines. So I suggest taking the time ghosting the horizon line and take your time on each line. Your rotated boxes looks really good. The boxes are close to each other and most of them are rotated quite well. I like that you managed to make it a circle but I could see a mistake at the box on the lower right. You will have a lot of time working on your boxes with the 250 box challenge so the mistakes are nothing to worry about.

Overall, you did a good job at this part of the course and all you need is to spend some time working on your confidence and muscle memory on your warm-ups.

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 box challenge.

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3:19 PM, Monday May 31st 2021

Thank you very much for your time. I will definitely keep your advise in mind. Your critique has given me a lot of motivation to move forward. Thanks :)

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