11:10 AM, Friday September 18th 2020
Thank you for the review :).
Ok then I am trying to put the pictures in the right order next time. But in case you see my submission for lesson 3: I already finished lesson 3 and uploaded it, so I can only use your advice for the rest of lesson 4 I am currently doing (and everything after that of course).
Yea I am having a bit of a difficulty with line weight, I am trying to do my line weight in a single stroke, but often I am a bit unsure and afraid to draw them confident, even though I ghosted them before. As for the form intersections, I honestly tried to use the line weight for this aspect of communication but was unsure about if I should also use it on the lines which show the intersection. So I experimented with this all over the two pages, trying to figure it out. So you are saying I should use it only to communicate what is in front and not apply it to the intersection lines?
Do you think they appear flat because I used to many? Uncomfortable mentioned in lesson 3 that too many contour lines can result in making something look flat, so this may be the reason if I look back :/.
Thank you also for everything else you wrote, I am trying to apply this now (but again, if you happen to see my homework for lesson 3 and 4, I am already working on lesson 4, so please do not think I am not using your advice, it is just that I already moved on so far).