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4:53 AM, Saturday January 23rd 2021
edited at 5:05 AM, Jan 23rd 2021
  1. Are you doing branches by connecting each ellipse individually with compound strokes as Uncomfortable instructs? It looks like you might be trying to track the whole branch with one fell swoop. Personally I think that way is easier and gives a more pleasing result, but we should also try to stick with the instructions.

  2. Really impressed with the plants you did. Not only are they convincing constructions but they all have unique character, which is a huge compliment. You do have a tendency to hatch the shadows on a lot of your drawings. It looks good but may also go a little bit outside the instructions we're supposed to do.

Overall, superb work. Your enjoyment of the process shines through and inspires me to do better!!

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Go on to the next lesson! Nice job!!

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edited at 5:05 AM, Jan 23rd 2021
9:18 AM, Saturday January 23rd 2021

Hello! Thank you for taking your time for the comment.

  1. Good point! I don't think I was doing that when I darken the outlines of the branches. (Instead opting it to do it in one fell swoop). That certainly does explain why my lines look off.

  2. Thank you! Hatching is a really bad habit of mine. I'll definitely be more mindful and opt of hard shadings in lesson 4.

Cheers! :)

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