Hello pimpoum, thank you for getting back to me with your revisions.

Your leaves are looking nice and fluid, but you're still not adding edge detail to them, in the one instance where you do add edge detail to your constructions you're zigzagging marks which is a mistake that goes against the third principle of mark making from Lesson 1.

Your branches are looking organic and solid.

I don't have much to say about your plant constructions, they are all looking very good and well constructed. Just don't forget that when making use of a boundary such as to define the space that petals will take up in space, do not extend your flow lines past the boundary, respect it specifically, otherwise it may as well not exist.

You should dial back on your usage of black, it's much better than your initial constructions but you're still adding too many big areas of black that aren't cast shadows or do not properly communicate texture to your work.

I'm going to be marking this submission as complete, good luck in Lesson 4.