Hi Iwuzhal, I've checked your submission!

Starting by your organic arrows, I like how you are making them flow all through the space of the page, though I'm seeing that you are struggling with keeping your lines confident and also with applying line weight and shadows. I know that the hardest kind of lines are the organic, so you more than ever you need to apply the ghosting method and take your time with it, remember to always prioritize confidence over accuracy.

Regarding where to apply cast shadows and line weight, here is a demo explaining tha topic, always remember to be subtle with your line weight!

Seeing your organic forms I think you did a pretty good job, your are keeping your forms pretty even and confident, remember that it will get better with time and practice! Now an advice on ellipses, only go through them with your pen twice, more than that and they will get messy, and don't worry if they don't look great, they also get better over time.

You did a good job on both your organic ellipses and curves, though you are not varying the angles of your ellipses, this is a key element to sell the illusion of depth.

Texture looks really good, it seems like you've taken your time observing, which is always good. However I'm seeing an issue in your dissections, in the majority of the textures you are applying them explicitly and end up making a lot of visual noise (For example the rope texture). As you have already said, this has a lot of contrast from what you did in the texture analysis exercise, where with the use of cast shadows you implicitly show the different textures. All this said, I think you did a good job on dissections, it's a hard exercise and you manage to draw the textures you were observing, even though you made it explicityl, it is a very big step!

I recommend you revisit this short but excellent video from the lesson.

Your form intersections look pretty good, the only thing I have to say about it is, remember that line weight is supposed to be subtle.

In your organic intersections you are supposed to draw through your forms, I know you didn't do it because you didn't want it to be messy, but remember that we are in this course to develop our spatial reasoning and consciousness, not to make pretty pictures.

Plus if it gets messy, that's were line weight comes in, think about it as a tool, not an aesthetic choice, that we use to communicate things to the viewer, in this case what's on top of what.

I'm gonna mark this lesson as completed, feel free to ping me on the discord server whenever you have finished another lesson, I'm gonna go over it!

Keep it up!