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9:31 AM, Friday July 1st 2022
Hi, this is mina today I will be the one to Critique your work
Before starting I would like to congratulate you on finishing the plants part
Starting
For theorganic arrows, I have nothing to say other than that you did a great job you followed the instruction perfectly
for the Leaves exercise, your leaves are great and the flow of them is perfect
Branches exercise is good but I would like to point one thing out in some parts of the paper which is that your ellipses are all in the same front what I mean is that you there are all the same degree and you needed to rotate them a little bit (I hope you get what I am trying to say )
plant drawings are perfect nothing to say other than well done
I would like to also say that your lines and marks are confident and this is something you need to be proud of
thanks for your hard work wish you all the best for the next lesson
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Lesson 4
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