Congratulations, this is a beast!
So I saw on the first 50, the lines and hatching were clean, and you had a good variation of convergence and box shape. You had some struggles with diverging lines, and some convergences pointing the wrong way. A few were missing the third set of lines.
However, by the middle 100, your convergences were improving, and you were drawing them pointing the correct direction. By the last 50, the were looking really solid!
Next Steps:
On to lesson 2! Also, if you haven't joined the discord yet, they have a critique exchange where you can critique 5 submissions, then have your submission added to a spreadsheet to get critiqued faster! (Details are in the pinned post.) Plus, you can get feedback along the way in the channels dedicated to each lesson.
Thank you so much for taking the time to provide feedback on my work and for the effort you put into reviewing it. I appreciate critique. Thanks as well for the time you dedicated to helping me improve. I will reflect my work based on your insights. I'm grateful for your support.
Best,
Neuromancer
Some of you will have noticed that Drawabox doesn't teach shading at all. Rather, we focus on the understanding of the spatial relationships between the form we're drawing, which feeds into how one might go about applying shading. When it comes time to learn about shading though, you're going to want to learn it from Steven Zapata, hands down.
Take a look at his portfolio, and you'll immediately see why.
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