Hello the name's fdawer! I'll be doing your review today.

For the super imposed lines, you do a pretty good job of making sure lines don't fray on both sides and keeping consistent to one starting point for each super imposed line.

For the ghosted lines assignment your lines almost always start in at least one of the two lines near them. And usually aren't too far from that second dot either!

Even in the ghosted planes assignment. Your lines are still very straight and don't curve much!

At first in tables of ellipses I noticed some spacing issues, but they seem to be quickly rectified later in the table. You also do a decent job of making sure to draw through the ellipses twice. However, looking at the lines of ellipses, I could be mistaken but it looks as if you are lifting your pen up, and drawing a mostly complete 2nd line, instead of drawing through the ellipses in one single swift motion of a properly (for the sake of this course) drawn through ellipses.

Your ellipses in planes homework has some of the ellipses having their form stretched more and more to try and properly touch the sides of the planes but yet the lines that make up the planes are still impressively straight! Though even your 2nd pages of ellipses in planes seems to be a lot much more clean and natural with the curves of the ellipses.

In your funnels hw, you do a lovely job of reaching the sides of the funnels with your ellipses, though some towards the middle are a little larger than some on the sides, but more importantly they are also sometimes as wide as the ones closer to the sides of the funnels.

Your plotted perspective has some of the vertical lines not lining up to be be perpendicular to the horizontal axis as hoped. But overall all the lines properly trace back to the vanishing points well and show a good understanding of the concept!

For your rough perspective homework, the line confidence can be seen to dip a bit. I also noticed for the first page of it, you had traced lines back to the vanishing point specifically, insteading of following the line towards the horizon line in the middle and stopping there.

For the roated boxes exercise, you do a great job of keeping gaps between boxes thin, still drawing through each of the boxes, and filling out the sides with boxes properly! From what I see, they don't all converge at the same vanishing points, which is exactly as intended

For the final organic perspective hone work, your line confidence in drawing boxes can be clearly seen improving! The sense of scale in relation to the distance of each box is pretty clear! Though I also feel as though some more foreshortening.

My best recommendation would be to practice ellipses more. I would recommend doing the table of ellipses practice again.