Hello STR3TCH!

Overall, nicely done.

Lines:

Your lines demonstrate confidence with smooth and consistent strokes. On rare occasions, they arc or waver a little as you draw the line to its target. As you continue to practice your lines, start thinking about the different levels of successful lines.

Ellipses:

You’re off to a good start; the ellipses are generally smooth and confident. Occasionally, they wobble and sometimes lose its roundedness as you fit the ellipse into the allotted space. Prioritize developing smooth, confident strokes. Then start to work on maintaining its roundedness, and then accuracy. The ellipses along the funnels’ minor axis are generally aligned. Great job drawing through your ellipses appropriately, about 2-3 times (though there are some exceptions here and there).

Boxes:

As you continue on to your boxes, I notice your lines are still confident. However, there are repeated, corrected lines. No matter how tempting it is to correct a line, do not repeat over it to correct it. If/when applying line weight, apply the same ghosting techniques and draw through with your shoulder to maintain a confident line (just as with the superimposed lines). In this case however, just apply superimpose the line once over and not multiple times.

Rough perspective:

You’ve done a fairly decent job maintaining horizontal lines to be parallel to the horizon line, and vertical lines are perpendicular to it. There are a couple of these lines, however, that tends to stray off slightly diagonally but not too bad.

Rotating boxes:

Kudos on getting through this exercise! The boxes are generally rotating, so nice job. They are pretty well neighbored to each other and are drawn through, which is great.

Organic perspective:

As the boxes get gradually smaller on the path, they appear to be further away from the viewer. There are some boxes’ set of parallel lines that diverge away, where the farther planes of the box appear to get larger and make the perspective feel off. No worries though; you will get to work on these more in the 250 box challenge.

With that, congratulations on completing Lesson 1!