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9:20 PM, Tuesday June 29th 2021

Your Lines exercises seem to be in good shape. Not perfect, but about where you should be at this point in your studies. Though for your Table of Ellipses, you may not be drawing over your Ellipses enough (you seem to have only done it once in some cases instead of twice or three times).

You seem to have the most trouble with your Boxes, which is also natural. For your Organic Perspective, on the first page a lot of your boxes towards the "back" seem to be drawn in the same orientation. You corrected this for your second, but on that one your boxes didn't seem to diminish in size properly as they recede into the background. For yopur Rotated Boxes, I noticed that the boxes that are further from the center seem to go to the same vanishing point, which they shouldn't.

Though most importantly, you seem to have done only one row of the Plotted Perspective exercise, when the example suggests three. Normally I'd say you could skip it, since it's a pretty mindless and easy exercise, but your Rough Perspective looks like it's all over the place (and you also didn't do enough of that), so maybe going back to Plotted Perspective might help.

Beyond that, you did everything about right for now, so just go back and re-do the Plotted and Rough Perspective, then you can move on (and knowing what comes next, you'll probably appreciate the extra practice drawing boxes).

Next Steps:

Go back and re-do the Plotted Perspective exercise at least two more times (create two to three rows on a single page) and then see if that helped your Rough Perspective by doing two more pages of that (also divide your pages into three rows each).

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:39 PM, Wednesday June 30th 2021

Thank you for your critique.

Here's the rest of the exercices I did not do https://imgur.com/a/8tRLPOY

6:38 PM, Wednesday June 30th 2021

Good job! You went above and beyond by re-doing the Organic Perspective when you just needed to re-do Plotted and Rough.

Next Steps:

Someone else also did a critique of you, so I'll go ahead and agree to theirs so you can move on to the 250 Box Challenge.

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