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5:26 PM, Monday January 30th 2023

Hello there I call myself *QUAT **** but you can call me **Quat* and I am going to critique your submission, which by the way thanks for submitting :)

First of all:

**Lines

I see that your lines are somewhat wobbly, it is okay as it is only the beginning and with more practice your lines will get better :) also at the superimposed lines exercise you have some fraying on both sides of some lines but you are okay to go since they are not common.

**Ellipses

You drew through all your Ellipses and in the funnels exercise you aligned the Ellipses with the minor axis really well most of the time which is good job:) I see that in the table of Ellipses exercise your Ellipses are quite messy and they are going outside of their panels and into other Ellipses I think that it is because you drew them without a concrete goal https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/nogoal and you should focus on drawing them in a way were they are not in one another and not far from one another

**boxes

Your boxes are well done and as far as I can see you did everything correctly congratulations :)

Next Steps:

1 page of the table of Ellipses exercise

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:41 AM, Wednesday February 1st 2023

Hi Quat!

Thank you so much for your critique. It’s really helpful and I appreciate it a lot!

It was definitely a great idea to retry the table of ellipses! There’s still lots of room for improvement, but I think I did a lot better this time around. I’m glad I tried it again!

https://imgur.com/a/lrXndm3

Thanks again!! :)

1:22 PM, Friday February 3rd 2023

Great job I will mark your submission as complete and I hope to critique your future submissions :)

Next Steps:

Next you should start with the 250 boxes challenge, don't forget the 50:50 rule as it is very easy to get burnt-out

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