Hello there I call myself *QUAT **** but you can call me **Quat* and I am going to critique your submission, which by the way thanks for submitting :)
First of all:
**Lines
I see that your lines are somewhat wobbly, it is okay as it is only the beginning and with more practice your lines will get better :) also at the superimposed lines exercise you have some fraying on both sides of some lines but you are okay to go since they are not common.
**Ellipses
You drew through all your Ellipses and in the funnels exercise you aligned the Ellipses with the minor axis really well most of the time which is good job:) I see that in the table of Ellipses exercise your Ellipses are quite messy and they are going outside of their panels and into other Ellipses I think that it is because you drew them without a concrete goal https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/nogoal and you should focus on drawing them in a way were they are not in one another and not far from one another
**boxes
Your boxes are well done and as far as I can see you did everything correctly congratulations :)
Next Steps:
1 page of the table of Ellipses exercise
Hi Quat!
Thank you so much for your critique. It’s really helpful and I appreciate it a lot!
It was definitely a great idea to retry the table of ellipses! There’s still lots of room for improvement, but I think I did a lot better this time around. I’m glad I tried it again!
Thanks again!! :)
Great job I will mark your submission as complete and I hope to critique your future submissions :)
Next Steps:
Next you should start with the 250 boxes challenge, don't forget the 50:50 rule as it is very easy to get burnt-out
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