Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction
10:07 AM, Tuesday May 10th 2022
interested in critique, particularly with my form intersections :D
Critique for lesson 2-
2.For your organic forms, you have managed to change the degree of the ellipses according to the viewer's angle. They look believable and 3d.Try to maintain a simple sausage shape for your convenience.
3.Textures- your gradients from light to dark are good and so are your dissections. You can practice more textures by doing the 25 texture challenge later in the course.
In the organic intersections, try to add contour lines only when absolutely required, because adding too much of them can look messy and scribbled. Extend the shadows more(they follow the surface of the form beneath) to convey the form as solid more efficiently.
2.Organic forms(contour curves-1 pg) (maintain a simple sausage form and add contour curves carefully, following the surface of the sausage forms)
You have improved in your revisions.Continue practicing them in your future warm-ups and keep the mentioned points in mind.Good luck on lesson 3!