Hello Xulu!

I considered the surface problem when analysing your submission. Remarkable that you were able to achieve this despite of that. Although for the next part of the course try to find the most suitable place possible to be able to draw comfortable, otherwise it will slow your learning process down.

Now, with the analysis

At first, watching the superimposed lines i got the feeling that you tend to curve the strokes. I recommend curving the line the other way, it tends to fix the tendency to curve the lines. When you practice your confidence strive to make you lines straight, as they are already confident and precise. ghosted lines also presents a couple of curved and woobly lines, did you ghost correctly the lines?

I´m not to worried about this because, fortunately, as you move forward in the lesson it gets a lot better. Good job!

Ellipses are generally great, they have good confident strokes. In Funnels, though, they got a little woobly, but is generally well executed.

Something i noticed in Boxes, is that, you made some correction strokes on the lines you believe that you made a mistake. Avoid doing this, it is better that you accept the mistake and move on, or compensate the box at some point. Don´t overmark the lines. However, remarkable margin of error, you were pretty close to the VP.

The best section is definitely rotated boxes, a really good thing being the hardest to achieve in the lesson 1. Congrats on that.

Organic perspective presents well structured boxes, and vary a lot in depth and size. Although i´m gonna remind you to loose the fear to overlap your boxes, and stop overmarking the lines, try to take additional time to plan each stroke instead of making them so thick, it´s harder for us to revision your work and for you to improve.

Concept mistakes

-Watch out, rotated boxes has 2 missing boxes on the corners.