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9:09 PM, Friday October 22nd 2021
hello rgb. I have look over your box challenge and your boxes look good and are drawn with boldness and confidence.but there are a few improvement you can make
Another thing is that some of your boxes where not converge correctly.it seems on some of them you extend your lines the way they were converging while they should be extending towards the vanishing point and not the viewer so we can understand the mistakes were making when making the box and why. this is a common mistake so don't beat yourself up
Another thing is there is a page of boxes that doesn't have their lines extended, you need to extend your lines so you can see what mistakes you're making to help decrease your margin of error
The majority of your boxes have the same amount of shallow foreshortening. The shallow boxes look great but its important to varie between dramatic and shallow foreshortening so you can get more mileage/comerablity in draw those two types
Overall you did fine but they need more work, i recommend you re read the lesson and practice drawing 30 boxes with the critiques i have given
Next Steps:
draw 30 more boxes
-in 3 point perspective
-extended lines being extended to the vanishing point
-5 boxes per page
- do it all with the ghosting method
6:06 PM, Monday October 25th 2021
Thank you for the feedback. I have done 30 more boxes as per your suggestion.
6:23 PM, Wednesday February 2nd 2022
sorry that i responding to this a year later. i was busy with my own drawing and forget to take the time to critique.
but yea your boxes look better.,although distorted. I say continue to lesson 2 if you haven't already
Next Steps:
proceed to lesson 2. keep working on you boxes. your doing great
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