7:27 AM, Thursday August 27th 2020
Hi Nirvik!
Congratulations on finishing your first lesson!
The line exercise looks great – line quality is good and they are not wobbly. I would encourage you to include superimposed lines in your warm-ups and maybe try with shorter lines first, and then, after doing a few shorter lines, go for the full-page-width lines. It should lessen the fraying.
You've done well with ellipses as well – they are mostly kept within the bounds of the table / plane and few of them are overlapping. While constructing your future warmups, I would include funnels – they should be symmetrical, when cut in half.
I personally struggled with the rotating exercise boxes and you've done great. Congrats!
About last pages – those with organic perspective – the lines seem a bit lighter and less confident then on previous pages. Remember to ghost the lines and try to perform them with confidence.
Finally, looking at the boxes, I can say that perspective is a bit off – but it's completely normal at the beginning! 250 boxes challenge is a great method of figuring out how convergence in boxes work and help you with estimating free-hand perspective.
Keep up the good work!
Good luck!
Next Steps:
250 box challenge