6:38 AM, Saturday September 24th 2022
Hello Hymanknyx, congratulation on attempting lesson one.
But I am afraid that it will be too difficult to critique your submission due to the quality of image being very low, and zooming in causes the photos to distort.
So I will suggest you to retake photos, you can use a mobile scanner app for convenience, and can also upload them all in a single tumblr file.
Hope you understand, have a great time ahead.