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3:59 PM, Thursday July 3rd 2025

Superimpose lines: The lines start mostly at the right point, the lines wobble a bit.

Ghosted lines: Lines are almost level 3, although I'd say the points are too thick.

Ghosted planes: There is more wobbling in here, probably due to lack of confidence.

Table of ellipses: Ellipses fit in the frame, some of them aren't distorted.

Ellipses in planes: You tried to make them touch the for sides. They are mostly even,though sometimes they go a bit oval.

Funnels: You drew through the ellipses. They fit into the funnel.

Plotted Perspective: nothing to complain.

Rough Perspectice: there is a lack of boxes on the frame's corners. Lines are better if compared to the ghosted planes. Boxes could've been bigger.

Organic Perspectice: The boxes have varied lengths. The sets of parallel lines don't converge as they move farther away from the viewer. You did negotatiate corners.

Rotated Boxes: The gaps are consistent enough. The boxes actually rotate, lines have gotten better.

Next Steps:

Two pages of organic perspective, with edges that converge as they move away from the viewer, consider reviewing the material.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
10:07 PM, Thursday July 3rd 2025

Thanks for the feedback! I redid organic perspective, I hope this is better

https://imgur.com/a/Bt6Qd5c

6:18 PM, Saturday July 5th 2025

Congratulations, your boxes have gotten considerably better! You can move on to lesson 2 now.

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