Hello! Today I'll be critiquing your work for today.

I'll be dividing it into three sections: Lines, Ellipses, Boxes.

Lines:

Starting with your Superimposed Lines, good job. You've drawn your lines in a variety of sizes and avoiding the mistake of fraying on both ends. Although, there's a low abundance of curve lines, I really recommend drawing those. As for your lines, the lengthy lines have more wobbles than the shorter ones, that's to be expected, since the shorter lines are easy to draw rather than longer ones. To avoid the mistake of wobbling, I want you to execute the lines with confidence. You also want to adjust the speed of your arm when it's now beginning to wobble.

Next is the Ghosted Lines, good job. You've filled the page with lines, and they vary from different sizes and angles. However, the wobble of the lines is very evident. For this, I want you to prioritize Confidence over Accuracy, with no vestige of Hesitation. Ensure straight, consistent, and smooth lines. Your second aim is Accuracy.

Lastly Ghosted Planes, good job. You've taken a big step of improving some of your lines. Some points still stand such as lines wobbling, just try to keep Confidence in the back of your head. I also have to mention that you don't have to correct the trajectory of the line approaching the endpoint, just allow it to miss.

Ellipses:

Table of Ellipses, great job. The Ellipse are looking good on how well bounded they are. The variety of sizes, orientation and degrees of the Ellipse, and how they occupy each space inside the table. The Ellipse were consistent and isn't that wobbly. Although, it's preferable to draw your Ellipse through just two times.

Ellipses in Planes, good job. Some of your Ellipses inside the planes were accurate. However, the point still stands that you should draw them just two or three times, I can't really much discern if the Ellipse is wobbly or smooth because of it. The Ellipse aren't much that tight because you've drawn through them a lot. Don't worry if the Ellipse isn't that much accurate, just allow it to miss. Try relying on your muscle memory here, and make the mark without thinking.

Lastly Funnels, great job. The Ellipses align with the minor axis inside the Funnels. It isn't that much too loose, however, some points still stands like drawing through your Ellipse many times.

Boxes:

Plotted Perspective. There is not much to say other than a great job.

Rough Perspective, good job. Some lines of the boxes were a bit wobbly, and please do not repeat drawing your lines as they can only be drawn once. Your perspective estimation was a bit off, but they can be improved with the 250 Box Challenge. I also notice that you are missing a oage of the exercise.

Rotated Boxes, great job. You seem to understand the rotation of the boxes. Gaps were narrow, and the lines have improved. The boxes running along the horizontal and vertical of the center box, the back planes look seemingly overextended. Other than great job, you will understand more of its rotation in the Box Challenge.

Organic Perspective. First page should be the boxes look progressively bigger in order to convey the depth of the scene. The second, one and three frame is the one you should be aiming for. Other than that good job.

Before I mark this lesson as complete, I must request the following:

1 page of Rough Perspective

1 page of Organic Perspective