3:53 PM, Monday July 11th 2022
Unfortunately there is a pretty significant issue that is present in the vast majority of your leaves here - specifically the more complex leaf structures which feature multiple "arms". You are skipping important constructional steps, in that you're not drawing each individual arm as a complete leaf shape as explained here in the lesson notes. You can also see this kind of thing in this demonstration from the informal demos page, which shows how we can build up to a maple-leaf type of leaf, building up complexity in successive stages, only ever adding that which can be supported by what's already present in the structure, and adding intermediary steps where they're needed.
Additionally, while your branches are definitely much improved over your last round, and you are extending each edge segment fully halfway to the next ellipse, I am noticing a tendency not to start your next segment at the previous ellipse, often starting it further along which minimizes the overlap. We can see an example of this here where the overlap is quite limited.
I'm going to ask for some further revisions below. I feel that if you can correct your approach with the more complex leaves, you should be good to go.
Next Steps:
Please submit:
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1 page of leaves, focusing completely on the complex leaf structures
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2 pages of plant constructions