6:03 PM, Thursday March 25th 2021
Here's a bunch of notes written directly on your work. Overall I'm seeing signs that you're trying to address a number of the issues I raised, but they're not always the most consistent. Your biggest focus here was definitely on the use of those additional masses, and I can see that their shapes are much more intentionally designed now. When it comes to head construction, use of the sausage method (you should be using it for the legs on the opposite side of the body as well, instead of trying to just roughly draw their outlines) you're definitely sloppier than you should be. Also, there are places where you still attempt to alter the silhouettes of the forms you've drawn, instead of working in a strictly additive fashion, introducing new 3D forms ot your constructions.
Next Steps:
Let's do another 2 pages of animal constructions, but instead of doing 2 per page, stick to 1 per page and use the whole page to give yourself more room for each drawing. Also, take more time with things like paws/hooves - you do it better in some cases, but there are definitely others where you're still leaving things quite unfinished.
There's no speed or time limit expected here - if needed, you can spend multiple days on a drawing. You don't have to get everything done in a set period, so there's no reason for some areas of your drawings to be less finished than others.