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3:13 PM, Monday October 4th 2021

Thank you for the thoughtful review!

You forgot to take the pictures of the planes page and have submitted them with the ellipses.

Oooops..

YOU DEFINITELY NEED TO PRACTICE ELLIPSES.

I agree, my ellipses need more love and I'll definitely work over it. I wasn't rushing, I just have a hard time doing them twice overall.

Regarding the rotating box I happened to see that the black boxes (the ones in the most extreme angles) should have its inner corners facing up instead of down:

https://imgur.com/a/ChcnF1h

There's always room for improvement!

Once again, thank you very much!

1:21 PM, Tuesday October 5th 2021

You're welcome

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