Hi and congrats on completing lesson one. I'll be taking a look at your submission today. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a decent start. You are doing a good job keeping a clearly defined starting point although I do feel that your line is a bit too shaky and wavering because you are probably a little too concerned with accuracy and are making your mark too slowly. I would try making your mark in one swift motion almost without thinking. It will be less accurate at first but will be much straighter overall. This same principle rolls over into your ghosted lines and planes and one of the main reasons we use the ghosting method. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/2/smooth I do feel that your ghosted lines and planes are improving in this regard although I'm still seeing some wobble and wavering at times.

Your table of ellipses is having somewhat of the same issues with deformed ellispes. You are doing a great job drawing through all of your ellipses and I can see that you are shooting for smooth ellipse shapes for the most part and are showing real improvement throughout these pages and with your ellipses in planes as well. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/deformed The likely reason you are still getting deformed ellipse shapes on occasion is that ellipses are hard to draw and you are still probably just a little too concernced about accuracy at times. Try and put down your marks confidently and rely on the muscle memory you build up while ghosting your mark. Your ellipses in funnels are having some issues with tilting off the minor axis that you should be aware of as well. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/13/notaligned Your ellipses are definitely improving but there's plenty of room for improvement here so keep practicing these during your warmups.

The plotted perspective looks fine nothing to mention here. Your rough perspective boxes turned out pretty well although you are having quite a bit of wobbly linework here. This is most likely happening because you are either skipping steps in the ghosting method or have reverted to drawing from your wrist which is something I see a lot with this exercise. So I just want to remind you to always ghost your lines multiple times and to draw from your shoulder with confidence. Even on shorter lines like these. Your wrist should be reserved for detail work only. You did a good job extending the lines back on your boxes to check your work. As you can see some of your perspective estimations were quite off but this is something that will become more intuitive and get better with practice.

Your rotated box exercise turned out pretty well. One of the biggest pieces of advice I can give here would have been to draw this bigger. Drawing bigger helps with thinking through spatial problems much more easily. You did a good job drawing through your boxes and keeping your gaps narrow and consistent for the most part. This is a hard exercise and you weren't quite nailing your rotations which is perfectly normal for now. This is a great exercise to come back to after the 250 box challenge to see how much your spatial thinking ability has improved. Your organic box exercise turned out pretty well. Your linework is looking more confident here which is good to see. Your box constructions are relying pretty heavily on parallel lines and in quite a few cases are diverging instead of converging so the 250 box challenge will be a really good next step of practice for you.

This was a good submission overall and you showed some nice growth with these pages. I think you are understanding most of the concepts these lessons are trying to teach pretty well. Keep using the ghosting method and drawing from your shoulder and keep practicing those ellipses. I'm going to mark this as complete and good luck with the 250 box challenge!