Good job on clearing lesson 1!

• Lines: As a general note, I think you need to work on your line confidence. Your lines, in general are a little wobbly, so remember to execute with confidence.

Superimposed lines: Its fine, but as I mentioned, I think you can push for confidence a little better. There's some wobble in your lines, especially your curved ones.

Ghosted lines: Your lines here are curving. Remember to trust in your ghosting when you execute, and ghost until you're confident. In addition, remember that in DAB, we always prioritise confidence over accuracy, so you should always strive for the straight line first, even if that means you miss the mark.

Ghosted planes: Here, I see the wobble again. Remember to trust your ghosting as you execute. Your lines here also seem to arc a little. If you find yourself doing that, remember to arc consciously in the opposite direction to counteract this effect, to produce a straighter line. But I will say that your line quality has improved a little bit as you move further in this exercise, so keep it up there!

• Ellipses: Like your lines, I see an issue with confidence. Remember to always trust your ghosting, even if it means you see your line go a little awry during execution.

Table of ellipses: I see some stretched circles, and some deformed ellipses in your work. Be careful about that. Your ghosting should be in the shape of an ellipse, so try to ghost according to that. And, when you ghost, you can free up your elbow a little. So long as the driving force is provided for by your shoulder, you should be good to go. I will commend your willingness to experiment with the ellipses in a single cell, so good on you there.

Ellipses in planes: You should strive to make clean ellipses over ones which touch the 4 corners of the plane. So, remember to trust your ghosting. Most of what I mentioned in table of ellipses applies here too. Aside from that, I've nothing much more to say.

Funnels: Again with the deformed ellipses, remember what I said. I think its good that you've mostly aligned the ellipses to the minor axis though, so good job there. In future warmups, try to implement the larger degree of rotation of ellipses.

• Boxes: I think they're done okay in general. Though I think that it bears mentioning that you shouldn't ever repeat your lines. Even if, in execution, they're incorrect, you should always treat it as though what you've planned is correct. And, for that matter, you can plan as much as you want. Litter the page with dots if you have to.

Plotted perspective: I don't have too much to say about this one, I think its done fine.

Rough perspective: Because of the nature of 1 point perspective, you shouldn't see any diagonals in your front and back face. Thus, if you ever notice any of them in your planning, you know to replot. Checking lines should also follow plotted points and not the drawn lines.

Rotated boxes: I don't think you really get the idea of "rotating" the boxes. Remember that the vps of the boxes should vary to depict rotation, and as such, there shouldn't be too many parallel lines in your boxes. I think that this guide goes over the idea pretty well. Give it a read: https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/cqvxap/i_created_an_extra_rotated_boxes_guide_for_people/

Organic perspective: Box construction isn't perfect, but you'll get to know more about that in the future. Aside from that, I think you got the idea of closer=bigger pretty well! Perhaps in the future, you can push it even more, but otherwise, a job well done here!

Overall, decent work. I want you to do a few more things before you clear up this lesson (Elaborated below). Keep up the good work!

Since your revisions were accepted and the site doesn't have a way to agree with replies yet, I'm posting this so that you can get official completion approval on the lesson!