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4:40 PM, Sunday August 23rd 2020

Congrats J91ART for completing the exercises for lesson 1. Here's my critique:

lines:

your lines are not bad there is a bit of wooble but it will get better with practice remember to draw them with the shoulder and ghost before putting them

ellipses

your ellipses are great smooth and not going beyond the bounds great job

boxes

your boxes are awesome! your work shows that you have a very good understanding of perspective probably it's not your first attempt... however it's look like you were using a ruler in your work so i can't accept that and you should redo all the work you did with a ruler. however great job!!

Next Steps:

redo the work you did with a ruler (rough perspective, ????) If this is not done with a ruler take it as a compliment.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
9:38 PM, Monday September 7th 2020
edited at 9:46 PM, Sep 7th 2020

Thanks for the feedback, in regards to the boxes, you can see the same wooble that you mention in the line excersice and even some doble line product of the miss jugde of the orientation of the line, remember that there is one excercise that ask you to use a ruler to make the first face of the boxes with the ruler and then, make the lines that goes to the banishing point, that it maybe the one that you say that looks make with ruler

edited at 9:46 PM, Sep 7th 2020
10:15 PM, Monday October 5th 2020

maybe, i looked it up again and it seem to be like that i am makring your lesson as complete i am sorry

Next Steps:

250 boxes challenge

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