Hello! Here's some feedback:

**Lines***

• Superimposed Lines: Good job on starting your lines directly on the point. The lines also look fairly confident.

• Ghosted Lines: Some lines have a wobble or curve to them, especially near the end. This usually happens when we consciously try to get our lines to end on the dot we've drawn. It's natural to do want to do this but remember to prioritise confidence over accuracy as accuracy will come with time and practice. There's not much we can do with wobbly lines.

• Ghosted Planes: Same comments as above, although I noticed that some lines are more confident, so good job.

Ellipses

• Tables: Ellipses are tight and within the bounds. Most seem to be drawn confidently, although some of the narrower ones have a bit of wobble. Try angling the paper so that you draw the ellipse at an angle where you can utilize your shoulder pivot.

• Planes: Good job on keeping the ellipses tight and confident.

• Funnels: Ditto as above. The ellipses are also fairly parallel to your minor axis lines.

Boxes

• Plotted Perspective: Completed; no comments here.

• Rough Perspective: Some of the horizontal and vertical lines for the boxes farther away from your vanishing point are not parallel with the horizon line or page edge. Don't worry though - you'll work on this in the 250 Box Challenge.

• Rotated Boxes: Good spacing around the boxes. The boxes along the top/bottom of your "sphere" could have been rotated more (since they should be almost flat), but it's still a good attempt!

• Organic Boxes: Good use of scale to construct 3D space. Some boxes have lines that are a bit out of perspective but you'll have more practice in the 250 Box Challenge.

Other / Responses to your questions

• I did notice halfway through that you used multiple pens with different widths. You'd probably want to stick a pen that has a 0.5 width and is black (or a similar dark colour). This width gives a strong enough stroke to learn from our lines (for example, you would see less of a wobble with a thicker pen although that wobble would still be there).

• It's hard to end directly on a point but that will come through practice. Focus on making sure your lines are confident, first! Don't be afraid to take your time while ghosting to really get the feel of your movement so you can execute it confidently.

• Some inkier pens might produce lighter lines depending on the surface you're drawing on. For me, I find that when I put a few pieces of paper underneath I can produce a stronger line because of the softer surface. See the FAQ for more info on pens.