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10:17 PM, Sunday May 24th 2020
Nice work men! Your work is really amazing (i struggled a lot doing boxes), your work is far better than mine.
Good luck!
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4:16 PM, Tuesday June 2nd 2020
Thanks @Wanaco21. I am struggling with boxes as well and had to do a lot of it before getting anywhere close to looking the way it should, especially rotated boxes.
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5:34 PM, Monday May 25th 2020
Hey Harschac!
Congratulations at completing lesson 1! Nice job!
Your lines overall are looking pretty good. Maybe you could take a little more time on ghosting so they feel more confident, because a few of them feels just a little bit wobbly.
You can also take your time at the start so you fray them in both ends. You just have to place your pen carefully at the beggining of each line so that doesn't happen.
ABout your elipses, a great deal of them are looking good, but I feel a little less confidence in them than with your lines. Some of them are a little bumby. You can also ghost a little more and put them down confidently, even if the firts results seem a little off, they get better with practice.
Your boxes are great too. Just apply the same line feedback!
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Cheers!
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You should make the 250 box challenge now
4:15 PM, Tuesday June 2nd 2020
Thank you for your feedback. It's very helpful!
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