11:17 PM, Saturday March 28th 2020
While you have submitted this for critique from community , I do want to point out that if you want official critique from Uncomfortable or one of the TAs, you'll need to resubmit this for official critique using your credits. If you don't care about official crits and just want to support what Uncomfy is doing here at DaB, then I'll help you find someone from the community to help critique your work (I don't quite feel comfortable critiquing lesson 2 myself)!