Hi I will be doing your lesson 1 critique.

Superimposed Lines looks mostly solid.I want to point out that you did some of the exercises in lesson 1 with pen i think thats fine for lesson 1 but as you keep going try to do your exercises in fineliner or brush pen if you can.With ghosted lines there is some arching and wobbly lines but there are also some confident ones.For the ghosted planes exercise there is still a little bit of wobble but lines are mostly good.

One thing I want to point out that your lines in the beginning did use to be more wobbly but as you went further in Lesson 1 they started to be much more confident.Great job on that.Wobbly lines mostly appear because students are scared to make the line (which is very common) and I think there is some of that in your work but as you draw more and do more warm ups especially from lesson 1 it shouldnt be issue going further.

Ellipses

Now with ellipses there are some problems mainly that they are deformed and not consistent.They are also not drawn trough 2-3 times.To prevent this from happening you should ghost more before putting the pen down and when you do make the line make it confidently thinking only about the end point not how accurate the line is.One thing you did well is that they are all fit in the borders very well so keep that up.

Funnels

Now your funnels are correct.Ellipses are smooth,they touch borders and ellipses are mostly aligned to their minor axis however they are really small so because of that you dont get to draw much from the arm or to draw the range of ellipses.Again they are mostly good but when drawing them again make them larger.

Ellipses in planes

They look very good.They are drawn confidently and are drawn trough 2-3 times,very good!One thing I want to point out is that some do look a bit deformed so keep an eye out for that.

Boxes

Plotted perspective looks mostly good.I see that you understand how your vanishing points work.

Rotated boxes

With this one there are some mistakes.Mainly the boxes arent rotated enough and because of that picture feels flat. https://imgur.com/a/HqoMKRy Its not that big of an issue for know, you are going to learn this concept doing 250 box challenge but I have to point it out.Also there is some mistakes with hatching.When hatching try to do it like you did ghosted lines exercise from one corner(line) to another.This mistake is common in your work.

Organic boxes

They are overall done confidently and they have flow.Tho try to avoid doing same boxes over and over again like this : https://imgur.com/a/nLKOdkN and try to have more diversity https://imgur.com/a/IC3SOiw . Tho I see that you followed the Y method correctly.

Rough perspective

This exercise is solid but your line work could be better.Next time try planing out your lines more and ghosting a bit more TAKE YOUR TIME when you are doing exercises.This is an important note.

Overall its a solid submission there are some mistakes but thats to be expected.If you could do your revision in ink that would be great but its not mandatory.

Looking good mate I agree with the previous critique fully. Also please ensure that you use a fineliner when required I believe this is a ballpoint pen your currently using and that’s perfectly fine just not for future reference. Also when doing hatching make sure you go from one side all the way to the other with one full line it will be critiqued in the 250 box challenge later on. Also please take your time on the next exercise it’s a big one. Good luck ????