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4:27 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1

Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends and arching lines overall nice job.

Ghosted Lines: Theirs some are not plotted well but over all nice job

Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

Table of Elipses: Some breaking out of bounds overall nice job

Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

Organic Perspective: Some box are not rotating over all Solid work.

Next Steps:

Before you move onto 250 boxes, I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting and reading on different angles for sphere.

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7:40 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024
edited at 4:24 AM, Feb 6th 2024

Thanks for the critique.

edited at 4:24 AM, Feb 6th 2024
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