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7:40 PM, Tuesday May 18th 2021

Thank you for your kind input, here's the 10 additional boxes i drew

https://imgur.com/a/wE0Tb1v

I was also hoping to get your feedback on the description i wrote for my submission prior to this .

2:35 PM, Wednesday May 19th 2021

What you described above is a very normal experience. As you continue to practice and grow your skills you will find exercises like this become easier. The only advice to give here is, do the best you can at the time and then move onto the next step.

Your revisions look pretty good. I can see your sets of lines are doing a better job of converging towards their shared vanishing points. The quality of your mark making is coming along well too.

I will go ahead and mark this lesson as complete and you can now move onto lesson 2!

Next Steps:

Continue to lesson 2!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
9:31 AM, Thursday May 20th 2021

Thank you ,I was actually worried ,that was reassuring .

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