4:51 PM, Tuesday April 8th 2025
I recommend reviewing the critique every now and then, as I think your first run through may not have fully understood everything I laid out there. I mainly say this because the main focus of the critique is that you focused on observation (and so your observation skills improved) but that this exercise has a lot more to it than observation.
So when your response was more observation, it gives the impression that you may benefit from going through that feedback again, maybe after a little while.





