Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants

1:24 PM, Wednesday August 25th 2021

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damn, this lesson is starting to get harder on prioritizing confidence over accuracy, and as with first times i'm not too happy with the result but i'm very happy that i am able to draw plants that shows form now

hopefully me scanning the image would make it much comfortable/easier on spotting my mistakes, anyways to whoever critiquing this submission, thank you for taking the time and i very much appreciate it.

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10:49 AM, Tuesday August 31st 2021

Hello LOADSOFSKEPTIC, I hope you are well.

Starting with arrows.

They flow nicely, you are making them smaller as they go into a distance, you are overlapping your edges so that's a good point, but you are repeating your lines way too much times here. You pointed that you struggle with lineweight, I do agree that adding lineweight to curves is definitely hard, but it is possible with enough practice and we are doing exercises here so the final outcome doesn't matter, https://imgur.com/OHvr7Mb diagram on lineweight.

Moving onto your leaves.

You are building them from simple forms then adding details, which is a correct process. You are folding them in a natural way. Nothing major to point out here, but in your 2/3 nd/rd leaf(the one that has 16 leaves) you put way too many of them, while drawing small we tend to skip construction and just focus on detail, drawing big is definitely better practice. Good job on those leaves either way.

Moving onto the branches.

They came out pretty good, but most of them are just cylinders and not branches. Also when you are drawing the lines for them always remember https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/18463269.png, I am pointing that out because some of your branches look awkward with your lines.

Lastly your plants themself.

In partridge pea drawing, you went definitely overboard with details there, you sacrificed form for details in the leaves on the right. Also if you are adding shadow, add it to the whole drawing, it will definitely make it more 3d to the viewer.

Something that I am noticing is that the degree of your ellipses isnt as consistent as I would wish it to be and it is appearing throughout your whole lesson. It is expected from a beginner, so nothing to worry about for now. Understanding ellipses really helps you build your masses in 3d space and reinforce your drawings. You are required to understand it in the 250 cylinder challenge.

Also when drawing that plant https://imgur.com/a/MXkNvaR remember to fully draw the contour during those exercises. Just a tiny nitpick, since we are constructing here.

Lastly, on your last page, you draw too many of them on a single page, 2 is a maximum that I would recommend, since past that number you are forced to draw small, and drawing small is just awkward for your shoulder. There is a lot of empty blank space on your pages, so use your whole page while drawing exercises.

In conclusion, you did a really good job, there are few minor mistakes, like the degree of ellipses that I would love if you addressed it during your warmups, but past that I will mark this lesson as complete. Good job.

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11:29 AM, Tuesday August 31st 2021
edited at 11:32 AM, Aug 31st 2021

hi, thank you for taking the time on giving me a helpful and constructive critique, i really appreciate it, and i'll keep it in mind to completely add the shadows(i'm also struggling where to wrap my cast shadows on a form) in the whole of my drawing and to draw big although i am mostly worried about my linework, which i'll try to address with superimposed curves/lines along with ellipses related exercises, for the mango i don't really have an excuse since i had this mindset in mind that fewer contour lines would be enough to emphasize my form(https://drawabox.com/lesson/3/1/organics followed the down right) but now that you mention it would've sold the illusion of 3d much better if i tried your approach, anyways thanks again! (yes i am well :3)

edited at 11:32 AM, Aug 31st 2021
12:34 PM, Wednesday September 1st 2021

I am glad to hear that you are well :),

About that mindset, it isnt a bad way of thinking, but you should "use a minimal number of contour lines to represent the form", more of that in lesson 5. Yours isnt bad, you just had to connect those contours.

With lineweight, just reduce the number of lines and follow that diagram.

On shadows and where to place them, there are exercises for later lessons on that. But if you wanna understand shadows better there is Steven Zapata's course, which is amazing and a ctrl+paint or just anything on youtube.

Imagining where your light is could help you too.

Thats it from me, have fun on your journey,

1:13 PM, Wednesday September 1st 2021

i'll keep those in mind! as well as the suggestions that you made, thank you again!

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