Hello Jukesir, I’ll be reviewing your 250 Box Challenge today.

First off, congratulations on completing the first hurdle of Drawabox. It’s definitely a long marathon, but the quality of work between the start and end pages really demonstrates overall improvement. I'll answer your questions before we start the critique.

1.Yup looks correctly applied to the silhouette.

2.Its okay if you switch, any fineliner that falls within the 0.4-0.6 range is good to use for the course. Here's more information in Lesson 0 in case you've missed it: https://drawabox.com/lesson/0/4/pens

3.I think some annoyance is par for the course in this program. However, we should never redo a line. If missing lines comes up consistently in exercises, it may be beneficial to slow down and take your time when ghosting.

You seem to remain within the 5-6 box limit at the start of the challenge and stray off to do 10-12 boxes per page. Not a huge problem but in the future it's helpful to get a refresher on instructions to ensure you’re keeping on track: https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes/1/assignment

Things you did well:

• Line quality makes a jump in improvement and maintains confidence.

• Hatching: during the beginning stages, your lines had a tendency to be wobbly and did not reach both ends of the plane. At the end, some undershoot can be seen sometimes, but you clearly make smooth lines with equal spacing.

• Clear experimentation of box size, foreshortening, and orientation. This is a positive habit to carry forward and helps progress our spatial reasoning.

Things you can work on:

• Hatching overall looked good; however, a majority of the time the lines end up floating and don’t reach both sides of the edge. Preferably, we would like to overshoot and sacrifice some accuracy for consistent lines on both ends. Be mindful and perform the same level of execution as you would with any line.

• Construction lines: although we prefer to have overshot lines (consistency > accuracy), sometimes your lines run past the plotted points by a noticeable margin. Improvement is seen later on, but I would recommend calling back to the ghosted lines exercise and the varying levels of success. You sit around Level 2, so I think it's beneficial to begin aiming towards reaching Level 3 during warmups. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/14/levels

• Line weight, you appear to have some cases of repeating lines, so I'll just remind you to add only one extra stroke and never redo lines as stated earlier.

Overall, you seemed to have consistent line and convergence accuracy. I think adding ghosted lines and superimposed lines to your warm-ups more frequently will aid your concerns when applying line weight. Besides that, I’ll mark this down as complete and send you off to Lesson 2. Good luck!