5:23 PM, Saturday June 6th 2020
Nice work! There's definitely a lot of growth and improvement here, and you're clearly taking better steps towards applying the principles of the lesson.
I've got a few points I've marked out here on your fox drawing:
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When adding additional masses, avoid sharp corners. Think of them like slabs of meat that you're adding to the form. Meat doesn't have sharp corners - it'll bend and wrap around, but won't feature such sudden turns.
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You're doing a great job of working in additional forms into your construction, but keep working on identifying others that exist along the body.
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You don't seem to be blocking in a full sphere for the eyeball itself - it helps when actually constructing the eyelids, since the eyelids wrap around it in 3D space.
Additionally, keep working on your observational skills. Your construction as a whole is coming along nicely, but I think proportions (which comes down to analysis/studying your reference) still have a ways to go. Your fox's body ended up looking a fair bit more like a big cat like a cougar or a lion.
Anyway, I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete. Keep up the good work.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.