1:36 AM, Wednesday May 26th 2021
Hi there Sandrash! Overall you're making good progress, but there are a few important issues I want to comment on, let's go!:
Starting with your lines you're making a pretty good job on the superimposed lines by commiting to your lines in general and not trying to change them even if you know they're missing the point, which is great!
The main problem is that sometimes your lines, specially on the ghosted lines exercise, are a little bit wobbly at times. Remember that when you execute you should always aim for confidence as your maximum priority, so make sure you're always aiming for it. Make sure you always draw with your shoulder and check if you need to speed up a little bit to make the lines confident.
The last thing on them is that sometimes you forget to draw the starting on ending dots before drawing some lines on the ghosted planes. Make sure you always draw them as they're super important for applying the ghosting method well.
Moving onto your ellipses you're doing a pretty good job drawing them confidently. They're a bit pointy and sometimes not symmetrical though, so try to keep an eye on making them as round and smooth as you can.
Sometimes in the table of ellipses the ellipses are a bit separated. Just in case remember that you should be aiming for the ellipses to touch the sides of the other ellipses and the top and bottom lines. Smaller ellipses seem like might have been drawn with the wrist as well, so if that's the case remember that you should always approach them the same way, ghosting and with the shoulder.
You did a great job keeping the ellipses confidents on the table of ellipses, good job!
Lastly on the funnels sometimes your ellipses are a bit wobbly and not drawn through 2 times, make sure you always take your time with every line and ellipse, ghosting and preparing as much as you need. Remember that you an always take breaks as well! No need to finish every exercise in one time, so if you feel like you're starting to rush take a break.
On the funnels as well sometimes the ellipses are a little bit tilted. The middle axis line must cut the ellipses symmetrically, so they can't be tilted. I know it's hard to allign them, just make sure you're always reminding yourself to allign them symmetrically.
Lastly on the boxes section you did good effort as well, but there are a few issues I want to comment on:
-Your lines in general get worse on this part. Try to approach every line as if it's a single ghosted lines exercise. Draw starting and ending dots and forget about what box that line is part of. Remember as explained on the ghosted lines exercise confidence is the most important thing, accuracy is secondary.
-Sometimes you repeat lines that were off. Whenever a line goes wrongly, don't repeat it, leave it be and move on to the next. Repeating it will only make the drawing messier and encourage bad habits.
-On rough perspective some of the vertical and horizontal lines are a bit tilted. So remember that on this exercise all height lines will always be perpendicular to the horizon line and all width lines will be parallel to the horizon line.
One thing that can help is to make sure the lines have this relationship before drawing them, and if they don't have it you can redraw the initial and ending dots as much as you want until you think it's correct.
And lastly on organic perspective, the main issues are the ones I explained earlier already. There are a few places in which you don't place starting and ending dots for every line as well too, so don't forget to always place them before drawing any line. Boxes have perspective issues but that's not a problem as you'll work on them on the box challenge. Focus for now on the things I mentioned earlier.
So like I said you're doing good progress, but before moving on I want to make sure you understand what I said, so I want you to do one more page of rough perspective. Make sure to pay attention to the things I mentioned and remember to take your time with it, if you need to take breaks so you don't rush then take them, you don't need to finish it in one day neither.
I want you to post as well the rotated boxes exercise you haven't posted. If you have already done it then just post both exercises at the same time, but if you still haven't done it, then I want you to post the rough perspective first before so I make sure you understood the things I said. Good luck and keep up the good work! You're almost there!
Next Steps:
-1 more page of the rough perspective exercise
-submit the page of the rotated boxes you haven't posted