Hey there, I'll be your TA today so let's get right to it.

You are superimposed lines are off to an okay start, but I'm seeing a lot of parking in your longer lines indicating that you are using your elbow more than your shoulder. This is no big deal because at this point you are just starting, the more you practice and mileage you gain the more confident you will get at this exercise.With your ghosted lines You are showing some progress, but there are still some arcing lines happening so make sure you are including this in your warm ups every time you sit down to draw.

I'm moving on to your ellipses, you are doing a much better job in making more confident marks. Your ellipses in planes are making contact with the correct spots of the plane's edges causing them to be properly anchored In space.With your tables exercise you could drawn your ellipses a bit tighter because with the loose draw through passes you are creating some ambiguity item no longer being anchor together as explained here. Your funnel exercise is very hit-and-miss in keeping your minor axis aligned to the main axis of the funnel. make sure to keep practicing aligning your access to a specific direction as this is very important in later lessons especially.

Now moving on to your rough perspective boxes you are getting the general ideas and concepts down.Your horizontal lines are parallel to the horizon and your verticals are perpendicular resulting in a proper orientation of your boxes. The biggest thing I went to point out right now is when you are redrawing lines. One of the reasons we use ink is to force ourselves to think very hard and prepare for each line before we put it down. So remember that a box is 12 lines so we should be preparing and ghosting 12 lines meaning it will take 12 times as long for now. As you get more mileage onto your belt the process will speed up but slow and steady at first. The top of all that when you redraw lines you aren't hiding things you're trying to fix but rather drawing more attention to them which is the opposite of what we want. Your converging lines are fine as you practice more you will be able to draw lines going to distant targets more accurately.

Now for the dreaded rotated boxes. Remember that first and foremost we expect everyone to struggle with this exercise. This exercise is not meant to be completed perfectly, or even correctly a majority of the time.Our only goal here is to throw students into the deep end and have them push through and try their best to finish this exercise, which you did barring a couple missing boxes in the top left. That being said I do have a list of things to point out to help further the learning process and hammer in some key concepts.

Adjacency - Your adjacent lines are pretty far apart so you can't properly utilize them as perspective guides. This is a really useful technique so make sure you're understanding it and can properly leverage it.

Rotation - Your boxes are not rotating, but rather skewing and shifting over, so give this gif some more attention and try to internalize how the rotation is driven by the vanishing points moving along the horizon.

Scale - You have some more room on the page you could have utilized. A good rule of thumb is to draw as large as you can so that your brain has the most room to work through these spatial problems. It sounds kind of odd, but it really does work.

Finally let's move on to your organic perspective exercise. aside from a little more of the redrawing lines issue I already pointed out these are some really nice exercises! They are full of motion and a full range of scale which indicates a foreground, middle-ground, and background. Additionally, you are playing with overlapping forms which causes the viewer's eye and brain to perceive these forms as occupying a single physical space. You doing these two things are key to properly selling the illusion of three-dimensional space on a two-dimensional paper. Your perspective is still developing and you have a lot of divergence going on ( meaning your far planes are bigger than your near planes, opposite of reality), but that will get worked out in the 250 box challenge.

Overall you've done a good job here and you have shown consistent Improvement throughout each exercise. I will be marking your lesson one as complete and you’re ready for the box challenge. Keep up the good work and we will see you next time.