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6:29 PM, Sunday April 25th 2021

Im not really qualified to give you any negative feedback, but i did want to say that i really liked your drawings.

Your organic intersections are well thought out showing how the forms bend and react to the other surfaces.

You are doing a great job building up the constructions on the animals. I also had a bit of trouble with cat muzzles, keeping the perspective correct is very hard with the foreshortening.

The way you built up the legs on the gazelle is really well done.

By the time you got to your final mash up monster it seems you really had a good understanding of this lesson.

The muzzle on that squirrel eating yoda monster is well built. Love it.

This is my first time doing a critique, but in relation to my work, i would definetly consider you ready to move to the 250 cylinder challenge. Keep it up!

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Start the 250 cylinder challenge before lesson 6

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2:00 PM, Saturday May 1st 2021

Thank you for taking the time to look through my work! All the best for your DaB journey as well!

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