10:48 PM, Monday August 24th 2020
Hi,
On the lines excercises i notice some bowing of the lines, this can be due to not drawing from the shoulder, it happens mostly on longer lines. keep an eye on that. Also on superimposed lines some of the lines fray on both ends like this https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/1585f266.jpg this tends to happen because of rushing and not properly placing your pen on the dot, take your time, no need to rush this course.
Planes seem quite good, remember to try and make de elipses just barely touch de edges of the plane, but dont sacrifice confidence and fluidity for it.
Your table of elipses seem to be less confidant and more concerned with accuracy, while accuracy is important as i noted before, never sacrifice confidance for it or you will end up wiht wobbly elipses. This also happens with funnels.
On rotated boxes i like the way you added lineweight, here i belive the mistake has been not properly aligning the front edges, https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/9a16c189.jpg as well as the first row of "corner" boxes not rotating, the front plane of them seems to look forward.
Organic perspective seems fine, i recomend adding line weight as you did with rotated boxes to aid with reading.
Next Steps:
Overall good work, this is a nice start. You seem to struggle with perspective but this is completly normal, i recomend going with 250 box challenge and not rushing it. Remember you can ask for advice on the discord channel.
