Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

4:40 PM, Wednesday May 24th 2023

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3:03 AM, Friday July 28th 2023

Hello I'll be covering your HW. Please make sure things are uploaded in order so there is no mix-up. Also make sure when takign the pictures, the other assignments are out of frame. Just so they aren't distracting.

Superimposed lines: A little messy but I think you got the idea.

Ghosted Lines: A number of the lines appear wobbly not as confident.

Ghosted Planes: A little rough, but line work is better.

Table of Elipses: Overall good job.

Elipses in a Plane: Can see a solid attempt and understanding.

Funnels: Elipses appear better.

Plotted Perspective: No issues here.

Rough Perspective: I see a few issues here. A couple boxes don't have lines, one has lines going way off.

Rotated Boxes: Yeah this is definitly going to need a revision.

Organic Perspective: Not bad but I think another attempt woudl help.

Next Steps:

So what I would like to see is one more attempt on organic perspective, roatated boxes for sure, and rough perspecitve each. I think what can help is just re-reading the insturcitons.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
11:24 PM, Wednesday August 9th 2023

Thank you for the critique and time for calling out mistakes, here are the new ones.

https://imgur.com/a/Ro4RedN

5:05 PM, Thursday August 10th 2023

Much better. I think now you are ready to move on.

Next Steps:

Just remember to read the directions carefully.

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