Hello there, congrats on making it through! I'll be checking your submission.
Arrows
Your arrows look pretty decent. You had some shading mistakes in the first page but your second page looks better overall.
Organic Forms With Contour Lines
Your sausages look pretty good as well. You could've played a bit more with the degrees of the ellipses to make your sausages a bit more dynamic though.
Texture Analysis
I can see that you were focused on cast shadows rather than shapes which is great. You manged to refrain from scribbling random lines as well, good job! Your transition could be smoother in the last row though.
Dissections
I feel like you used random lines for some of the textures (flames, apple etc.) here. But other than that, it looks okay.
Form Intersections
The main goal here is to create a picture where all forms resemble that they share the same scene. You've managed to do that by creating forms that have consistent foreshortening. Your intersections look pretty decent as well, good job!
Organic Intersections
Both of your pages look pretty solid. You managed to avoid complex shapes and none of your sausages are floating. Your shadows curve around the forms nicely as well.
Overall, you did a pretty good job! I'm critiquing this lesson for the first time so sorry if I made some mistakes. If you have questions though, feel free to ask me here or tag me on the discord server by the same name. Good luck with lesson 3! :)
Also a quick note, try to use imgur in the future if possible. Imgur is usually more user friendy than google drive.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 3
Definitely agreed on points mentioned. Thank you for critiquing.
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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