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Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants

12:46 AM, Tuesday November 30th 2021

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2:15 PM, Wednesday December 1st 2021

Hi I will critique your work and try to provide a review on the basis of all the knowledge that I have gained on the subject and would request you to please review my lesson so that even I may proceed ahead.

Your leaves and arrows are totally alright,keep up the good work,I would recommend you to make bigger leaves(or maybe you are using a bigger paper so the leaves look small.) so that you are able to distinctly make out your lines and also draw the curves with your shoulder.Do not try to overuse line weight,use it only to establish hierarchy and use it only on specific sections.

You need some practice with stems.When drawing the ellipses.make sure to align them to with the minor axis and also try to visualise how the degree of each ellipse will change as the stame rotates in 3D spaceLook at thisand also instead of focusing too much on branching.try to make your stems better.

The plants are really good(It would have been awesome of you had also uploaded the reference images) If you can get the technical stuff and put things together It is great.Please just do not redraw the lines like onthis cactus.

I hope this vas valuable

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If you want you can do one page of branches and then move onto the next section.

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8:56 PM, Wednesday December 1st 2021

I did not even think of providing the references too, I will keep that in mind in future lessons. Thank you for the critique I will absorb everything you said and do varying branches before moving on. Thank you for the critique. have a beautiful day, week, year/s :)

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