Hi,I'm Jojoffrey and i will give you feedback for you. Firstly, congratulation for finishing lesson 1 on DrawABox !
Before giving you feedback i will point to change your medium with print paper. Sketchbook can have bending page that can distort your line or in your case having ring that can get in your way for drawing.
For the Line homework :
Confidence over accuracy, always.
For the ghosted line, i find your line curved a little, you must use your whole arm so moving with your shoulder. The line must be straight.
For the ghosted plane, i see you applied the ghosted line into account, that's good.
For the Ellipse homework:
it's just random shape of ellipse in the square space.I recommand to redo the exercice while rereading/rewatching the course.
For the ellipses in plane, overall i think it's good.
For the Funnel,some of your ellipse dont touche the side.Another thing is you add a ellipse outside of the funnel, try to put the ellipse in the range of the funnel.Some
of your ellipse lack centering in the axis too.
For the Box homework:
You forgot the fourth edge in your box, you must apply it, even if it's not vertical.
Some of your back box are not rectangular,again i find your line wobble a little here or arching.
dont allign well with the other box.
that can conclude into wrong box. And trace all the edge visible, even if it's hidden by a box.
Next Steps:
I suggest you to remade one page of table of ellipse exercice while watching clearly the content and trace the line in red color(most common in the homework) the line extension in the rough perspective exercice.Again if your unsure,rewatch the video.
I have done revisions and did another table of elipses
https://imgur.com/a/drawabox-J9U00Rb I've added the revisions to bottom of the page
I've find it a little more better than the first table of ellipse you did but you forgot to add little ellipse trough the gaps. I want you to make sure you know the exercice so add little ellipse trough the gap. After that i think you can move on on the 250 box challenges.
Next Steps:
add little ellipse on the table of ellipse. Rewatch the lesson if necessary.
Awesome jojoffrey thank you. I'll add little elipses after work today. I'm looking forward to progressing and thank you for your fast response
https://imgur.com/a/drawabox-J9U00Rb I filled in the gaps
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