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2:20 PM, Tuesday August 17th 2021

Hello Benj, thank you so much for your thorough and helpful feedback!! I'm pretty inexperienced with drawing in general (this was the first structured lesson I ever took) so I struggled a lot, especially with the exercises that included drawing ellipses. I decided to do another page of the tables of ellipses exercise and focused much more on drawing confident, somewhat not deformed ellipses rather than being overly accurate. Can't really say that everything worked out better (especially the very circular shapes are still bumpy) but I think this page over all turned out a bit better than the previous ones. Either way I will continue to practice these ellipses in the future, until I am finally able to nail down actual smooth and stable looking shapes.

So here is my second attempt:

https://imgur.com/a/h1pwELZ

7:43 PM, Tuesday August 17th 2021

Much better! One last thing, before I have you move on: be mindful of your pivot. I notice some pointy ellipses, there, a tell-tale indication of a lesser pivot (that students tend to subconsciously switch to, when faced with a sharp turn). To avoid it, simply check back, every once in a while, that your lines are originating from your shoulder.

Next Steps:

Onto the box challenge!

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10:27 AM, Wednesday August 18th 2021

Alright, I will keep an eye on that from now on. Especially for smaller ellipses this problem probably has occurred sometimes. Thanks again for the feedback!

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